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Hi Dear Friends, it just came up to my mind, it can be nice to play in words by counting syllables
It can be a nice starting for Haiku poems... Can it be? I begin with a line and it should be 5 syllables and then, the next one will start to write his/her own line beginning with my last word... Is it ok for you?If you don't find it enjoyable, that's ok. We can delete this topic. Thanks and Love, nia Rising at the top (ri sing at the top) 5 syllables... (I can count sometimes wrong because of my count )
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Top the rising Sun
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Salita La Collina Licht be your step, and licht be your heart- Frae happy Days, May you never part. Look at my Pal the singer |
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Sun goes down in there
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There, singing all birds
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Birds of paradise
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Paradise and dreams
no one wants to go on... beginning with last word, a line in 5 syllables!
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dreams can be the paridise of the mind.
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Hi Joe, this is a wonderful line but it should be in 5 syllables!
"Dreams of the mind" for example if I count right Thank you for joining this, I hope you go on, love, nia
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Opps. sorry Nia, just wasnt thinking. "Dreams of the mind" it is.
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Mind voyages in songs
Thank you Joe.
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Songs are for singing
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Singing in the rain
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Raining in my heart
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Heart beats per minute
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minute waltz for me
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